Wednesday, May 20, 2009

...

Cold winds around me
grey clouds swirling,
tree's billow round
that set their leaves twirling.
The first drop on my arm
making a cold proclamation
many follow after
my clothes in wet saturation.
The cold seeps in slowly
and the rain runs off my face
I hurry my steps onward
to get out of this place

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I'm not sure if this is happy or sad. how you describe the rain starting is beautiful! And then you want to run away...
I love it.

Brittany Bakker said...

I dunno, its just how it came out.

Thanks :-)

Heidi said...

This is great!

You totally capture the feeling of it.