Downward drifting
gently sifting
pure white flakes
cold and crisp
soft and brisk
this snow makes;
glittering castles
wonderland tassels
ice and snow
forever falling
gently calling
I hope you like my first pitiful attempt at poetry and free verse. I don't think I'd be able to ever compare my best with heidi's worst (if she has any)
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8 comments:
"wonderland tassels"
cool imagery.
yeah right brittany. this is as good as any of mine.
sometime I am going to do a post with my first attempt.
hehe
you will love it
lol
Thanks heidi!
haha, nice. I'm already looking forward to seeing your first attempt. :-P
You should post it on your blog!
I like it.. pretty good for a first try.:) It makes me even more excited about the snow, if possible.
Not bad at all, for your first attempt
I rather enjoyed it! nicely done! Will there be any future poems? :) *is excited*
hmm... not sure. I might post other poems if I think they're ok..
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